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DragonSpark – A Dragon’s Spark

11 May

I was sitting on a boulder, at the edge of a ridge. Above me, the heavens were wrapped in darkness. The clouds shifted, casting an ominous shadow on the ground. Dark, thick clouds they were. The town in the distance had burst aflame mere minutes ago, lighting up the evening sky with an orange hue. Sins were being answered for. Souls were begging for a mercy that would not come. A dragon was on the loose.
What did they expect?
A few moons ago, the King had called for the extermination or capture of all dragons throughout the realm. Hunters had been appointed. Squads had been brought together. The King was going to show those oversized, flying lizards who was the true ruler of the land.
He was confident, as dragons had always been peaceful creatures, never attacking unless provoked first. However when an affront was made to their very existence…
The one that the village hunters had captured was the very first dragon to be attacked by the King’s Crusade, the first victim of Human overconfidence. They put him to sleep with coated arrows and locked him up bellow the town’s moat. However a couple of hours ago, I sensed that the village I had called home, despite the hatred of its inhabitants for all things natural, was about to see its last sunset.
I was a Spark, a mortal being that had channeled the arcane powers of fire unconsciously upon birth. I could understand the dragons, empathize with them, and communicate with them. Those of us who made their abilities public were either tortured to death or executed. Luckily for me, I knew better than to host a mummer’s show in the town square. Besides, the arrogance of the villagers had brought enough fire to the town without my engulfing a couple of branches in flames. Remembering their faces, I felt sorry for a few, but sad for none. They had all treated Nature and her creations with disrespect, hunting during mating seasons, chopping trees in the summer and emptying the wastes of the town straight into the river. If anything this was Justice, a strict Justice, but Justice nevertheless.
Those dragons had now become the weapons of Nature to fight back against Human aggression, and Nature was very kind towards innocents, but ruthless towards aggressors. In most towns throughout the land, the steady beat of music was still alive with happiness. In those towns, food was tasty and hunger was scarce. In those towns, they didn’t leave agonizing animals to rot in the forest because of a hunter’s complaints on its quality of fur. In this town however, the only sound that now lived was that of searing fire and burning wood.
A roar of rage brought me back to reality. The dragon had been hit. I closed my eyes and focused my soul on his presence, sending my consciousness out in the town’s direction. What I saw was gloomy. The dragon had multiple arrows in his wings. Arrogance had won its first victory… Or had it?
I jumped down from my rock and started alongside the ridge, going back the way I came. I spawned a ball of fire in my hand, as if to make sure which side I was on. I had never killed, but my kin was in danger of death, and those about to end the creature’s life didn’t deserve to have one of their own.
I was walking across the plains that led to the town when I sensed something. I stopped. A smile crept up on my face despite me, a cynical smile to say the least. There were probably less than 100 knights left in the village. I was confident that, despite my mortal body, I could reach the wounded dragon, heal him with my fire and, if worse came to worse, ride him far from these corrupt people. That was no longer needed. I walked to a lone tree near me. I climbed on its lower branches and rested my back against the trunk. When Nature passes a sentence on those who harm it, that sentence will be executed no matter what. Thoughts similar to this phrase ran through my head as winged shadows traversed the fields with incredible speed. Above, the owners of these shadows were roaring with anger, preparing to unleash the cleansing flames of Nature upon the corruption of Humanity.
If the fire wasn’t big enough before, then it was about to become just that.

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My-friend-Dragonspark’s second write – this time he got it all right for the speakeasy but doesn’t want me to submit it. Instead he wants it to join his first story, Adrift which looks kind of lonely all by itself. If anyone ever comes onto my blog to see other-than-challenge stuff I hope they find these 🙂

DragonSpark Edit: Hello guys! So yeah, I was kinda regretting not having posted this on the Speakeasy back when I wrote it. Back then it made sense, but still. So for this week’s Moonshine, I’m giving it a brief, temporary upgrade to give it a chance to shine, even if just for two days. As always, thank you for stopping by and your comments are much appreciate.

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4 responses to “DragonSpark – A Dragon’s Spark

  1. glasgowdragonfly

    20 July 2014 at 08:44

    DragonSpark – this is absolutely brilliant! Fantasy is not usually my go-to genre, but yet you managed to capture my attention and imagination here. Is the plan to do a full length story? Please submit to speakeasy and be confident about the yeah write community there – they are great and will offer you honest critique.

     
    • DragonSpark

      20 July 2014 at 11:32

      Now, for the record: The reason I didn’t submit the two first posts of my category to the Speakeasy of that week, even if they were written with it in mind, is that I wanted to test my skills before giving a post to the YeahWrite community, not submitting until a satisfactory level was reached, thus sparing the posters from a slight waste of time, and saving some blogosphere credibility in the process. However, being a fan of this story (can you be a fan of your own work?) I did want to give it a second chance.
      If you’ve got time on your hands, I’ve already got an ongoing fantasy series with a similar feel (which I’m probs gonna continue next week). First part right here:

      https://imab00kworm.wordpress.com/2014/05/19/dragonspark-speakeasy-162-terror-in-the-dark/

      However, because I do like this world, and because the idea of a Nature vs Human/Dragon vs Hunter is kinda cool, maybe, just maybe, I might continue this…. maybe.

       
  2. Patricia Rivera

    21 July 2014 at 17:25

    wow, are you developing this into a book? I didn’t see the first draft, but this is awesome. I love the dystopian and fantasy feel of it. And yes, we can all be fans of our own work. I’m trying to teach my daughters this – to be proud of themselves first and foremost (versus expecting it from others) Great work!!

     
    • DragonSpark

      21 July 2014 at 22:56

      Well, I don’t know about a whole book, but maybe another few parts… Thank you for stopping by, and for the very, very nice comment.

       

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